tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5988612575864130544.post699915337440227354..comments2023-05-31T04:55:41.541-07:00Comments on Rhythm of the Light: rewrite: Spring Fever's TouchUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5988612575864130544.post-71268647906918888772012-04-17T21:23:04.268-07:002012-04-17T21:23:04.268-07:00interesting, disapointed though no accompanying ph...interesting, disapointed though no accompanying photo<br /><br />much love<br />gillenaGillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5988612575864130544.post-3392570860832384172012-04-12T05:02:01.027-07:002012-04-12T05:02:01.027-07:00smiles...i really like the last stanza, but you se...smiles...i really like the last stanza, but you set it up nicely with what comes prior...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5988612575864130544.post-63840613922020616342012-04-12T04:07:58.216-07:002012-04-12T04:07:58.216-07:00This slightly longer and edited version really doe...This slightly longer and edited version really does read quite nicely as a classical piece of poetry. I do like this and the end line pointing one to merely touch their own bindings to be free.the walking manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10058913927297370740noreply@blogger.com