Sunday, December 12, 2010

Give up?


Give it six months she said.


If we can’t feel

a warmer sun,

budding branches,

flowered gifts,

give it up,

and take Spring.





This is a poem/short story in exactly 160 characters.  Read more HERE at Monkey Man's blog.   Write your own post on Sunday and let him know!




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  1. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallDecember 12, 2010 at 9:49 AM

    beautiful 160,
    spring is coming,
    stay put and everything will be fine!

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  2. Monkey ManDecember 12, 2010 at 10:40 AM

    Great 160. I love the new life Spring brings. Thanks for playing.

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  3. TALONDecember 12, 2010 at 11:14 AM

    There's hope tucked inside this 160...and, yes, Spring is coming (but never soon enough).

    Loved it, Dianne.

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  4. AnonymousDecember 12, 2010 at 2:34 PM

    hehehe ..that was a sweet 160... full of some warm hope! So much needed in the coupla months to come.. :)

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  5. Brian MillerDecember 12, 2010 at 6:55 PM

    i hope your spring comes soon...

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  6. the walking manDecember 13, 2010 at 4:12 AM

    Lordy just let me make it through this one and not tease my self over the next season a comin'

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  7. MonaDecember 13, 2010 at 4:24 AM

    Spring and sun will come together :)

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  8. gautami tripathyDecember 13, 2010 at 5:42 AM

    Spring is far away for us!

    Here is my Sunday 160: melted

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  9. ShadowDecember 13, 2010 at 6:59 AM

    very clever. so true...

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