Tuesday, November 9, 2010

veiled threat

Close enough to touch


veil of fog shields nearer threats

horizons will wait.

5 comments:

  1. Love the haiku and the matching photo - or vice versa!

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  2. Threats smell of intent
    fog can not hide the design
    snow falls regardless

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  3. nice haiku Mark, and a perfect response to the intention of the original

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  4. oh, but mystery is so enchanting, threat or otherwise

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  5. Yes, I like them both, your's and Mark's, perspective all rearranged.

    xo
    erin

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