Wednesday, March 24, 2010
waves
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She sits awhile in shadow
staring at the unlit window,
and turns the music up
from the driveway in her coupe.
She rubs her hands, cold and gnawed,
wheel-worn where too tightly held,
like reeling in an empty line,
or rolling over one more time,
chewing on some week-old bread,
or kneeding down a hardened bed.
But oh,
still it comes,
in and out on waves,
like hot showers on winter days,
or like a cold, chocolate shake
into a searing belly ache,
like caresses through long hair
on a trapeze in ocean air.
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photo by Jillian Standish
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The photo is stunning; your words flow free and refreshingly so
ReplyDeletemuch love
gillena
Memory of days gone by seem easier to reach out to now that I am old enough to not fear the lull between the waves.
ReplyDeleteI like those wheel-worn hands
ReplyDeleteI loved the language in this, the music of it. I'll have to read it a few more times to catch what I've missed. Are they memories that come in waves, as WM said?
ReplyDeleteI hear music when I read this piece. Fantastic!
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This poem is perfect in setup and finale. I, too, am left wondering - the "they" - memories?
ReplyDeleteAs Chris said, the language is beautiful.
Yes, happy memories, and yes, someday I may write a song, who knows?
ReplyDeleteThanks you guys!
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ReplyDeleteHey, thanks for the nomination! Creative Blogger Award, that's a compliment. I have one question for your 14 answers, "What do you do or where do you find the place and the time to write your best stuff?"
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