Sunday, September 30, 2012

99% gibbous haiku





Round moon in near pines
as smooth a face as water
washing clean your cheeks

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3 comments:

  1. the walking manOctober 1, 2012 at 3:31 AM

    I love this haiku Dianne!
    Fits the Japanese style perfectly and hits the Western style as well. Be beautifully done.

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    1. DianneOctober 1, 2012 at 6:52 PM

      Good to hear from you, Mark. It's been awhile for me. I'm glad this piece works! That's quite a compliment from you!

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  2. Brian MillerOctober 1, 2012 at 3:37 AM

    smiles...love the thought of the moon washing my cheeks...

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