Sunday, September 30, 2012

99% gibbous haiku





Round moon in near pines
as smooth a face as water
washing clean your cheeks

3 comments:

  1. I love this haiku Dianne!
    Fits the Japanese style perfectly and hits the Western style as well. Be beautifully done.

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    1. Good to hear from you, Mark. It's been awhile for me. I'm glad this piece works! That's quite a compliment from you!

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  2. smiles...love the thought of the moon washing my cheeks...

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