Friday, May 7, 2010

55 flash fiction of a hand

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Keys to a portal
Tools for conjuring
Spells, spirits and addicting flights

Dare to examine the course
along a feathery, furry path
surrounding the bone and sinew frame

Unwind the images
of hidden shapes, curves and warmth
scents, sounds and pressures.

Touch ignites the sensitive spark
of liquid amber core heat
flowing from every pore.

write a poem or story in exactly 55 words, let G-Man know, HERE

15 comments:

  1. a flight of iminagination into the fancy of movement and touch grounded only in contemplation

    much love
    gillena

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  2. Hand written, no doubt. I just love this and the whole flow. I wish I could touch it. My 55 is HERE .

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  3. Wonderful poem :) I love the ending :) Mine is up HERE. Have a great Friday :)

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  4. the opening stanza is very fantastical..like the flow of this...nice 55.

    mine is up!

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  5. wow! i'm going to stop holding my breath now...very intense, your words are powerful...a fine 55! thanks for the read :)

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  6. profound and astonishing 55.
    loved it very much!

    Happy Friday,
    Happy Mother's Day!

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  7. such a wonderfully intense yet beautiful poem.
    I truly enjoy it.
    Mine is here
    Have a great weekend!
    Happy Mother's Day!
    hugs
    shakira

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  8. A lovely, sensual 55 indeed!

    I didn't participate this week. But there is always poetry at my blog.

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  9. Beautiful! You've given us so much to think about with this one, Dianne.

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  10. As if a hand could become a bird and fly into the world of discovery.

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  11. Nice description and images, I like it.

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  12. Happy Belated Mother's Day!

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  13. What if I said this one FLEW over my head? You are so deeply spiritual and metaphoric. I gripped this one with both hands and took flight.

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  14. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/09/sunday-special-awards-for-remarkable-memes-and-participants/

    Meme participation awards.
    Enjoy your pride!

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  15. Some great thoughts - great thinking - going on here.

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