Sunday, May 16, 2010

Sunday 160 Fetishes

Find inside

trigger of tides

trinket bears

rare cares

closure

ridiculous

switch wishes

everything off

never enough

food, feet,

salty, sweet?

Relief bleak

fetish

of the

weak.

This is a poem in 160 characters, spaces included.  If you want to meet the challenge, post yours on Sunday and let Monkey Man know HERE

5 comments:

  1. You say so much with so few characters. It is a real talent. Thank you for playing the Sunday 160. I always look forward to reading you.

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  2. nice. i like the stack of stones in the pic...so did you find relief?


    nice flow to your 160...

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  3. I agree with Monkey Man. I think this is a real challenge, and you meet it well!

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  4. 160 characters actually could be defined as a fetish as well.

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  5. very powerful and animated 160.
    superb job!
    ;)

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