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If you want some of my honey
won’t you bring some nectar home?
You’re spreadin' all the pollen
on the brightest blossoms,
sniffin at something I can't see
like a dog below a magnolia tree.
I know where mine's growin’
in the flowers of my garden.
I hear you buzzin near,
and I wonder why you’re here?
Write a story or poem in exactly 55 words, let Mr Knowitall know (listed on my blog)
Gorgeous photograph and beautiful poem with a perfect final line.
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed!!
mmmmm, honey, yes please...
ReplyDeletenice...i chuckled a bit there...playful 55...
ReplyDeletemine is up!
Great 55. Guess that's why I keep buzzin' round. My 55 is HERE .
ReplyDeleteVery impressive extended metaphor. True poetry.
ReplyDeleteI love this! Great attitude!
ReplyDeleteI came sniffin' round your magnolia tree and love your little blossom of a 55.
ReplyDeleteDi...?
ReplyDeleteThis was Fantastically Yummy!
I need to keep my Big Mouth Shut!!
Have A Kick Ass Week-End...G
Great verse! I love the imagery!
ReplyDeleteI can hear Howlin' Wolf doing this.
ReplyDeleteI can't imagine why anyone could resist your bloom with all that sniffing they are doing! Great 55! Thanks for visiting mine.
ReplyDeleteDianne, I have poetry going up at 7 PM and midnight my time. I hope you'll stop by and let me know what you think! Are you really coming to Philly?
ReplyDeleteI like it; very springy :))
ReplyDeleteDianne, thanks for the visit, and your deeply thought-out comment...much appreciated, and happy to know you....