Take the jumpstraighten the slump
work the hump
angrily stomp
feel yourself cry
slowly sigh
make a try
see how high
you can fly
This is a poem in exactly 160 characters, spaces included. The challenge is from Monkey Man, HERE for a story or poem, posted on Sunday, let him know and visit one other 160 .
Looks like a great jumping off point for flight. Thanks for being a part of the Sunday 160. They're about all I have the attention span to read as well. *smiles*
ReplyDeletenice rhyme scheme...i always wanted to fly as a little boy...
ReplyDeleteKat, if I can post it I will, my photos should speak for themselves. I will not, don't worry, post it on Tuesday Toes.
ReplyDeleteA difficult challenge, yet constraints so often bring out the creative best. this one is well done, indeed.
ReplyDeleteThis reminds me a lot of r. Seuss's Oh, the Places You Will Go. It sounds like an anthem for self-reliance and motivation. Very nice.
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