Sunday, July 18, 2010

The trick

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She moves hers to his

touches

now caught

in a weave.

They try hard to pull apart

but are held more tightly.

Supported in the middle

pushed together,

they are freed.



(what am I?)
this is a flash fiction in 160 characters.  If you want to meet the challenge, post on Sunday and let Monkey Man know  HERE and visit one other 160.

8 comments:

  1. A 160 puzzle. Very clever! Chinese handcuffs?

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  2. a zipper?
    a hook and eye button?

    oo i like guessing....smiles.

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  3. Chinese Finger torture. Great 160 in riddle form. How fun. Thanks for playing.

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  4. What a lovely mystery in 160 characters. I may not be able to solve it, but I love the riddle.

    Will we get the solution?

    Thanks for dropping by and leaving a comment.
    PG

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  5. I'm no good at riddles, just not a deep thinker. the music player on my blog is from playlist.com. all the instructions are there, if I can figure it out anybody can.

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  6. I thought it was two dogs banging!
    Sorry...

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  7. I will give the answer tomorrow on Tuesday Toes.
    you might have it right!

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  8. Could be a safety belt as well...?
    No matter what it is - it's beautifully written and I love riddles...!
    And thanks Dianne for your nice words over at my blog - really touched my heart - and I have already written some songs - maybe I'll give it a try with this one...
    Claudia

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