Wednesday, September 8, 2010

One foot

        One foot
In front
           of
               the Other,
-
       overcoming
inertia.
-   
       Breathe in,
two-three-four
       footsteps
                harnessing
                     gravity.
-
        August glows
through
       leaves as
                ocean
                         glass.
-
       Sycamore shudders
palms
         fluttering
                    in symphony.
-
        Columned
sidewalk
        of rose trees
                       face 
                             off,
-
        heady but
scentless
       beyond
             a foot
                  away.
-
        Slingshot
around
        the obstacle
              by your side.
-
       Accellerate
in joy
       on a new
               trajectory,
-
       one foot
in front
       of the  Other.

  

11 comments:

  1. nice. i love the structure you chose..it rather feels a bit like skiing as well...nice pic too...

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  2. Hmmm... don't you overcome inertia (the tendency for an object in motion to stay in motion) by applying friction?

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  3. You are correct, Eric, thank you for the definition. All this time I had the impression inertia is what keeps an object from randomly moving from a stop. My teenagers helped me harness the property of inertia in space. .....from the couch, however, it's another matter....Ha!

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  4. Well, the rest of your 'science' was spot-on and cleverly utilized.

    Yes, couches are a wonderful invention... but I usually default to my La-Z-Boy recliner.

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  5. Hmmmm....
    I'm Chopped liver now?
    It's a good thing I checked....
    have a Kick Ass Week-End Fab Di

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  6. I liked the spacing and the pacing and the feel of this poem. And as I'm laying on my sofa right now, I'm loving it even more because I think inertia agrees with me!

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  7. Form and content work really well together here. This strides along impressively both verbally and visually.

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  8. Fab Di....?
    C'Mon...Remove shoe.
    "Click"
    Download.
    Post...
    Yes, it's just THAT simple!

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  9. Love this, the form really pulls you through and the ending is just right.

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