Sunday, November 14, 2010

Gratitude for:

for the fertile crescent in the desert

crescent moon changing my tune

crescent smiling when I touch

crescent rocking into crescendo

crescent of your arms at rest

 
 
This is a flash fiction, poem in exactly 160 characters, spaces included.  Our Sunday 160 host is Monkey Man HERE .  Visit, comment, and try your own on Sunday.  Let him know of course.

14 comments:

  1. Wonderful and the ending is perfect :o)

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  2. This just lovely. There's something lilting and calming about these words. I'm so glad you have awakened you muse. She's feeling good, I can tell.

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  3. you know there is a beautiful peace to this...nice 160

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  4. i love the moon changing your tune...that's beautiful

    ..my 160

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  5. Just a great feel beginning to end with this Sunday 160. Thank you for choosing to post your creative thoughts through my little microfiction.

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  6. And don't forget those fresh from the bakery crescent croissants that always make me smile, too! Seriously though, I enjoyed the love infused in your micro fiction.

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  7. WOW!!!

    I Bow to the Queen.....:-)

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  8. Impressively spontaneous in effect, in spite of being written within rather rigid constraints. And the repetition works very well.

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  9. Lovely reflection. It could work as a song, I think.

    http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/11/14/sunday-160-fear-mongering/

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  10. so much more to a crescent than... well... a crescent! nicely done diane!!!

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  11. One day I will become less verbose unless of course someone starts a prompt day of "write something longer than 300 words in free verse octet form."

    Nice Job Di.

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