Sunday, April 25, 2010

Prelude to a nap

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Take the keys to the car
the battery’s dead
turn off the oven
the element’s out
drop the key to the clock
pull the plug on the rock
roll onto the couch
stop and blink.


This is a Sunday 160 flash fiction poem.  In 160 characters, spaces included if you are up for the challenge, post on Sunday, and let Monkey Man know HERE and tell one other person.
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8 comments:

  1. Monkey ManApril 25, 2010 at 8:11 PM

    Ack! I have so had one of those days. Great job with your 160 character challenge.

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  2. Brian MillerApril 26, 2010 at 2:44 AM

    sounds like a good day for a nap...lol. nice 160!

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  3. AnonymousApril 26, 2010 at 11:12 AM

    When all else fails, a nap still works.

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  4. MikeApril 26, 2010 at 3:52 PM

    What is "Pull the plug on the rock?" I am just curious? Is it like turning off the music?

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  5. the walking manApril 27, 2010 at 6:14 AM

    When I did finally make a few college classes I majored in napping.

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  6. Dave KingApril 27, 2010 at 7:04 AM

    That does it for me. Great!

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  7. g-manApril 27, 2010 at 7:15 AM

    Layed out on the couch
    Gathering the Energy.
    To destroy The World!!!

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  8. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallApril 29, 2010 at 8:10 AM

    happy break!
    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/04/28/thursday-poets-rally-week-16-april-29-may-5-2010/

    welcome join our Rally....
    thanks for the time!

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