Sunday, December 12, 2010

Give up?


Give it six months she said.


If we can’t feel

a warmer sun,

budding branches,

flowered gifts,

give it up,

and take Spring.





This is a poem/short story in exactly 160 characters.  Read more HERE at Monkey Man's blog.   Write your own post on Sunday and let him know!




9 comments:

  1. beautiful 160,
    spring is coming,
    stay put and everything will be fine!

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  2. Great 160. I love the new life Spring brings. Thanks for playing.

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  3. There's hope tucked inside this 160...and, yes, Spring is coming (but never soon enough).

    Loved it, Dianne.

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  4. hehehe ..that was a sweet 160... full of some warm hope! So much needed in the coupla months to come.. :)

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  5. Lordy just let me make it through this one and not tease my self over the next season a comin'

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  6. Spring and sun will come together :)

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  7. Spring is far away for us!

    Here is my Sunday 160: melted

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