Saturday, December 26, 2009

California Winter



Bright winter sunlight
Bounces outside the window
Boys with pogo sticks
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7 comments:

  1. G-ManDecember 26, 2009 at 9:09 AM

    Happy Holidays
    To the fabulous Dianne
    I need a Rolaids!!

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  2. James OwensDecember 26, 2009 at 9:15 AM

    Ah, I like this. A perfect image for "winter," jealous here in the froen heart of the Midwest.

    Great sound-work, b's and vowels, coming down on the tongue like a pogo stick:

    "BOUncing OUtside the windOW
    BOys with POgO"

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  3. Brian MillerDecember 26, 2009 at 3:28 PM

    ha. love it...boys on pogo sticks! hope you are having a great holiday season!

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  4. Enchanted OakDecember 26, 2009 at 4:32 PM

    Wow. I like James's comment. His insight enhances your poem. It is lots of fun!

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  5. the walking manDecember 27, 2009 at 6:39 AM

    I like the analogy of the light bouncing as boys on pogo sticks well done Dianne.

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  6. Marion McCreadyDecember 27, 2009 at 1:12 PM

    I agree, great analogy!

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  7. ABQ AnnieDecember 30, 2009 at 8:28 AM

    Light bouncing like pogo sticks, I like it :)

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