Sunday, December 20, 2009

Sunday 160


Warming light
Solstice lacks
Deep under

Greying white
Shimmers black
Waking longer

Crows fight
Fires crack
Hearts ponder

Frozen tight
Hands slack
Find wonder

Thawing night.
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8 comments:

  1. nice 160...actually all the wonders you list make me smile...its the little things that inspire awe...

    my 160 is up now...

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  2. Awesome 160! And happy solstice.

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  3. There are beautiful rhythms and rhymes in here. You have a touch with brief evocation of things.

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  4. Solstice 160....Wow. love this Dianne.

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  5. this on the coldest eve of the year... perfect!

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  6. I really like the form you've used. The tight wording and the rhythm work well together, nice one!

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  7. oh, this is wonderful - it has a frosty yet so joyous music to it. and the images are alive, even more so that no "i" is used.

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  8. your language in this one is tight.
    it reads perfectly.
    xo
    erin

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