Saturday, January 16, 2010

Another Time

-
Bald eagle above

snowy peak. Head and tail turn

raven in the sun
-
-

15 comments:

  1. The 5-7-5 form is a fascinating thing when the image is succinctly communicated.

    You do this very well Dianne.

    ReplyDelete
  2. Ah, ha! How clever. And yet, humbly offered, from early on my walk this morning. OK, it was not an eagle! :) But yes, it was a big bird.

    Buzzard glides above
    frozen snow covered fields
    first. Sun glints on tracks.

    ReplyDelete
  3. Good morning, dear one. I'm studying the vision in your poem. It's a nice thing to do as the sun comes up.

    ReplyDelete
  4. so much packed here...nice, Dianne :)

    wishes,
    devika

    ReplyDelete
  5. Dear Dianne
    Thanks for stopping by my blog; please dont be a stranger, visit often

    much love
    gillena

    ReplyDelete
  6. nicely done dianne! so much in so little. yes you are good at it! smiles.

    ReplyDelete
  7. This is a beautiful piece, Diane!

    ReplyDelete
  8. Ah, Loved this post!

    And thanks for stopping by!
    Your blog is great!
    Im following you :)

    ReplyDelete
  9. a majestic touch of nature here.

    ReplyDelete
  10. The lovely Dianne.
    Writing about Birds and such.
    You sure like Haiku!!

    ReplyDelete
  11. hawk shadow
    this projection on the bog
    a weasel hides

    Good work, Dianne. _m

    ReplyDelete
  12. The kite above
    flying a dream ―
    raven in the sky

    Your haiku is very inspiring, Dianne san!

    ReplyDelete
  13. I like your consciousness of the form -- the transformation in the beginnings of the lines "bald ... snowy ... raven" ...

    ReplyDelete
  14. a single moment, a single vision, your eye and the bird becoming one...

    very beautiful...

    ReplyDelete