Works by Dianne Gross-Giese
The 5-7-5 form is a fascinating thing when the image is succinctly communicated.You do this very well Dianne.
Ah, ha! How clever. And yet, humbly offered, from early on my walk this morning. OK, it was not an eagle! :) But yes, it was a big bird.Buzzard glides abovefrozen snow covered fieldsfirst. Sun glints on tracks.
Good morning, dear one. I'm studying the vision in your poem. It's a nice thing to do as the sun comes up.
so much packed here...nice, Dianne :)wishes, devika
Dear DianneThanks for stopping by my blog; please dont be a stranger, visit oftenmuch lovegillena
nicely done dianne! so much in so little. yes you are good at it! smiles.
This is a beautiful piece, Diane!
Ah, Loved this post! And thanks for stopping by! Your blog is great! Im following you :)
a majestic touch of nature here.
The lovely Dianne.Writing about Birds and such.You sure like Haiku!!
hawk shadowthis projection on the boga weasel hidesGood work, Dianne. _m
The kite aboveflying a dream ―raven in the skyYour haiku is very inspiring, Dianne san!
Great poem. Very evocative.
I like your consciousness of the form -- the transformation in the beginnings of the lines "bald ... snowy ... raven" ...
a single moment, a single vision, your eye and the bird becoming one...very beautiful...
The 5-7-5 form is a fascinating thing when the image is succinctly communicated.
ReplyDeleteYou do this very well Dianne.
Ah, ha! How clever. And yet, humbly offered, from early on my walk this morning. OK, it was not an eagle! :) But yes, it was a big bird.
ReplyDeleteBuzzard glides above
frozen snow covered fields
first. Sun glints on tracks.
Good morning, dear one. I'm studying the vision in your poem. It's a nice thing to do as the sun comes up.
ReplyDeleteso much packed here...nice, Dianne :)
ReplyDeletewishes,
devika
Dear Dianne
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by my blog; please dont be a stranger, visit often
much love
gillena
nicely done dianne! so much in so little. yes you are good at it! smiles.
ReplyDeleteThis is a beautiful piece, Diane!
ReplyDeleteAh, Loved this post!
ReplyDeleteAnd thanks for stopping by!
Your blog is great!
Im following you :)
a majestic touch of nature here.
ReplyDeleteThe lovely Dianne.
ReplyDeleteWriting about Birds and such.
You sure like Haiku!!
hawk shadow
ReplyDeletethis projection on the bog
a weasel hides
Good work, Dianne. _m
The kite above
ReplyDeleteflying a dream ―
raven in the sky
Your haiku is very inspiring, Dianne san!
Great poem. Very evocative.
ReplyDeleteI like your consciousness of the form -- the transformation in the beginnings of the lines "bald ... snowy ... raven" ...
ReplyDeletea single moment, a single vision, your eye and the bird becoming one...
ReplyDeletevery beautiful...