interesting poem here... i'm taken by how the missing last half syllable leads to a kind of anticipation -- and then to see the label of senryu seems to clear some of that up... nice play on form...
That elephant-like rock you show dredges up an old memory. In a small boat I went under the so-called 'crocodile rock' in Gozo near Malta. I was promised a sunset I'd never forget.
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Poor little Baby
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Psssst...Di. Listerine!!
in anticipation lies the pleasure I guess...like the kiss of waves on the feet, which takes you off your feet...good photo for those words, Diane :)
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devika
ps: the title for this and the previous sounds like me...a moment i feel i have no time, the next i feel there is a hell of time left! :)
this leaves so many questions twirling in my mind. good ones though...
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ReplyDeleteinteresting poem here... i'm taken by how the missing last half syllable leads to a kind of anticipation -- and then to see the label of senryu seems to clear some of that up... nice play on form...
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For the one loved.
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9 words to give the entire scene. Well done Dianne.
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ReplyDeleteI hope you have felt such anticipation recently.
i like those roller coasters....smiles.
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after this coaster ride
the one I miss
don't like coasters
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i like anticipation, too
erin
That elephant-like rock you show dredges up an old memory. In a small boat I went under the so-called 'crocodile rock' in Gozo near Malta. I was promised a sunset I'd never forget.
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