Wednesday, January 13, 2010

Too much time

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Anticipation:

30 minutes/coaster ride

For the one kissed.
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Thanks Dave King at Pics and Poems for the Haiku
definition.  Photo: Jillian Standish, Pt Buchon, Calif.

12 comments:

  1. Poor little Baby
    Nobody wants to kiss you
    Psssst...Di. Listerine!!

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  2. in anticipation lies the pleasure I guess...like the kiss of waves on the feet, which takes you off your feet...good photo for those words, Diane :)

    wishes,
    devika

    ps: the title for this and the previous sounds like me...a moment i feel i have no time, the next i feel there is a hell of time left! :)

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  3. this leaves so many questions twirling in my mind. good ones though...

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  4. interesting poem here... i'm taken by how the missing last half syllable leads to a kind of anticipation -- and then to see the label of senryu seems to clear some of that up... nice play on form...

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  5. Imagination:
    3 hours/coaster arrival
    For the one loved.
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  6. 9 words to give the entire scene. Well done Dianne.

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  7. Less is always more.
    I hope you have felt such anticipation recently.

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  8. i like those roller coasters....smiles.

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  9. Remarkable! _m

    hopes
    after this coaster ride
    the one I miss

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  10. don't like coasters
    do like kissin'
    i like anticipation, too

    erin

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  11. That elephant-like rock you show dredges up an old memory. In a small boat I went under the so-called 'crocodile rock' in Gozo near Malta. I was promised a sunset I'd never forget.

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