Thursday, December 17, 2009

55 Flash Fiction Friday



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And Then There Was That
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We had a lunch date.
You pushed it back 15 minutes.
Was that just to shorten our time together? You were late!
I wondered, when would you ever get out of the bathroom?
I really didn’t think you were interested anymore.
Then I caught the look in your eye,
watching me unobserved,
through the doorway.
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----(photo here and on profile by Jillian Standish)

10 comments:

  1. that ending made me smile. I like that. My 55 is HERE.

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  2. could not help but smile...love those looks.

    mine is up!

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  3. Ya never know and never should assume. Well done.

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  4. This is awesome. I can see why you're 'into' writing...your work is fabulous.

    MY 55 is all about snow suits and the urge....come see HERE

    HAPPY CHRISTMAS!!!!

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  5. We've all been there, I guess. It has the ring of truth.

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  6. Oh, slyboots!
    This is a wonderful tale in 55 words. Has heart, suspense, sorrow, and joy. Good job!

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  7. things that make you go hmmm... great 55!!

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  8. That was awsome!
    Loved this 55 Dianne...
    This made me smile as well..:-)
    Thank You for this fantastic story Today.
    Thanks for playing, And have a Kick Ass Week-End!
    Galen

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  9. Very nice, Dianne. So much going on, and a wonderful ending.
    Mine's up~

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