Monday, December 14, 2009

Hoar Frost


Hoar Frost

First frost snaps bare white.
Awakening aged viewpoints'
Transient jewels.

4 comments:

  1. You're making me want to do haikus because you do them deep and beautifully. Pretty darn good work in 17 syllables.

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  2. I especially love the sound of the first line -- a string of sharp hard syllables like gems of frost...

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