Sunday, January 10, 2010

Rebirth 1-10-2010

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Incurably sick?
Analgesic!
Rest
Nest.
Incense:
Frankincense
Pure
Myrrh
Recline
Anodyne
Mend
End.
Fire
Pyre.
Char
Mar.
Plunge
Expunge.
Sterilize
Cauterize.
Nascent,
Scarlet
Embryo
Ex vivo.
Muse
Fuse
Phoenix
Matrix.

11 comments:

  1. Terribly
    farging
    interesting,
    the construct
    of this.
    xo
    erin

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  2. from 'incuribly sick' to 'matrix', what a trip!!!

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  3. I like this, Dianne. The rhyme in these short lines is the pulse in a strong artery.

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  4. A fascinating journey taken in syllables across the universe. I really like this and it also is quite humbling, like the photo.

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  5. the phoenix arose only to find themselves stuck in the matrix....yikes!

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  6. nice poem... i love this style... as i think i told you before...

    here's one from me to you along similar lines


    standing
    shower
    grounded
    slippery

    porcelain
    curtain
    laughter
    trickery

    taking
    body
    frigid
    suckling

    showerhead
    bustling

    FLUSH

    scalding
    retreat
    cool
    coaxed
    water
    lily
    warm

    like your love

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  7. an excellent poetic journey, its sparseness lets the mind wander on the links between the words

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  8. Very interesting, and i came to wish a Happy Birthday Diane -b'lated, though :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  9. Happy birthday, Dear Dianne. Nascent. Fresh. Nest. Expunge. Arise out of the pyre a healthier woman.
    I didn't do my blog roll yesterday. I am sorry I didn't wish you your big beautiful birthday then. I'm on a writing deadline today too. Look at what I'm doing instead. I'm waiting for some women to wake up so I can interview the. Happy day after your big day. It's not the quantity. It's the quality.

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  10. Dear Dianne San,

    Happy rebirth
    to Dianne San
    haiku present from Japan!

    Best wishes,
    Hidenori Hiruta

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  11. Rest
    best
    tressed
    nightgown
    blessed
    daylight
    rest

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