It is an interesting piece Dianne. I think there is much more to be read here than you may have intended, but then, that is the convoluted nature of the form you used in this. Well done.
Oh the photo, well, it was the afterthought. Less the refracted prism and more the blinding sun (drats, caught me empty handed, it was all I could find in my album)
i see no reason to want to change a single thing you have here... i am so fearful of poetry.. and haiku makes me shudder in pure terror.
ReplyDeleteyou make it look easy.
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I like the use of 'prismacolor'. A commercial handle given dignity by its context.
ReplyDeleteI can't imagine how you got those three lines from that image, but I'm very glad you did!
ReplyDeleteIt is an interesting piece Dianne. I think there is much more to be read here than you may have intended, but then, that is the convoluted nature of the form you used in this. Well done.
ReplyDeletei second: "haiku makes me shudder in pure terror".
ReplyDeletebut oh, how much i love that picture, the softness of that light, that haze... even more and beyond words could ever tell...
Oh the photo, well, it was the afterthought. Less the refracted prism and more the blinding sun (drats, caught me empty handed, it was all I could find in my album)
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